My "New" Website

http://www.miragebc.co.uk

+1 for Christopher's comments - make sure your CTAs are very easy to find.  I'm also not a convert on the pink... honestly I thought it was a cleaner's website or something similar when I first viewed it.

phone number on the top of the homepage! :)

Tend to agree with the above comments. You need to make better use of the landing space on the home page (the part of the page you first see) The boxes at the bottom of the website are more interesting to somepne coming in to have a look rather than the text.

Whilst I'm not a complete fan of the pink/pastel colour scheme, I'm always a fan of different, just can't work out if this looks like a 'different' accounts website in a good way (if you get my drift). Far too many accounts websites are boring and formal. Whatever you do break away from that, although as mentioned maybe not with PINK!

Thank you for your comments guys! 

I knew the Pink was high risk when i chose it but it was a choice based on how dull and boring other accountancy websites look.  I just wanted to stand out and be different.

In the near future I may change the pink to a different colour just to see if it helps make the site look better.

Cheers!

Dan

Agree with most of the above.

However it is certainly better than I would do.

Couple of points:

1) Too much white space on home page.

2) Too much text on the main info on home page, find a way of condensing or hire a good copy writer. This also causes the boxes to disapear off the edge of my screen and I am on a v large monitor with tiny resolution. on 1024x768 this means the last thing you can see is the "get in touch now"

3) The bit with the "Tax Deadline" in it seems like an odd location, I would move to the right above testimonials.  

4) Remember people spend about 5 seconds deciding whether to stay on a web page or not, so get your message across clearly and simply in the first page that your visitors will see.

Good start though!